LUIS
He is from Cabimas. He's a student from Graphic Desing school and is 21 years old. He lives in Cabimas.He likes playing basketball, listening music, and sharing with his friends.He doesn't like listening to reggeton and to sleep late. His dream is to finish his career and start to work.He thinks that English is very important because it is a world language. It's talked in important countries.IRVING
He's from Maracaibo. He is a student of Graphic Desing, too. He is 20 years old and lives in Maracaibo.He enjoys playing music, specially tecno-vallenato, he likes to chat with his friends and he loves eating pizza.He hates smoking, heavy metal music and cleaning his room.His dream is to travel to Asia and speak English perfectly.His opinion about English is that It is a very important lenguage becuase many people know it.
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In my first class I met 2 new friends... They are Luis and Irving....
LUIS
He is from Cabimas. He's a student from Graphic Desing school and is 21 years old. He lives in Cabimas.
He likes playing basketball, listening music, and sharing with his friends.
He doesn't like listening to reggeton and to sleep late. His dream is to finish his career and start to work.
He thinks that English is very important because it is a world language. It's talked in important countries.
IRVING
He's from Maracaibo. He is a student of Graphic Desing, too. He is 20 years old and lives in Maracaibo.
He enjoys playing music, specially tecno-vallenato, he likes to chat with his friends and he loves eating pizza.
He hates smoking, heavy metal music and cleaning his room.
His dream is to travel to Asia and speak English perfectly.
His opinion about English is that It is a very important lenguage becuase many people know it.
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Keep on shining!
Doris3m
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